The content sounds very good. It goes directly to the poverty topic. But it sounds kinda basic too. Nothing is very much creative after all, but I like the part when you use the uneducated man to talk about his life. Very realistic. The information you talk about is plain. We all know that, but it is really hooked thru the narrator voice. Thru out the podcast, you were talking about only one main idea poverty, which makes people understand easily and quite fast to predict what you are going to say next. The conclusion is like at the middle of no where. You really didn’t get to an end and you already give out the quote. It sounds kinda awkward to end there too. The music that you chose is impossible to hear. First of all, it is small, which is okay, secondly, the artist sings it too high that it mixed up with your voice. That doesn’t sound so good. Thirdly, at the very last part for your quote, I think you shouldn’t change the music. Just let it run as a smooth line until it stops is better, in my opinion. And to me, it is okay if there are some kinds of lousy noises like your split or your breathing in it. You better be aware of that I suppose. Beside, thru out that one minute podcast, I only heard one baby cried sound effect. And it doesn’t really fit either. It doesn’t sound serious any more. The transition is good. No gaps is leaving behind or too different about distance. Well I am not a very good writer so to be honest, I am not sure whether you said right grammar or not. But it seems to be right I guess. The flow of rhythm in yours is good, sound great. But it is quite loud and the sound effects you use don’t make the podcast sounds professional. One minute is a quite good length to keep the audience awake. There are some parts in your podcast that doesn’t have the same volume. Like the narrator voice is way too loud but the cover is way too small, make it really unbalance.
The content sounds very good. It goes directly to the poverty topic. But it sounds kinda basic too. Nothing is very much creative after all, but I like the part when you use the uneducated man to talk about his life. Very realistic. The information you talk about is plain. We all know that, but it is really hooked thru the narrator voice.
ReplyDeleteThru out the podcast, you were talking about only one main idea poverty, which makes people understand easily and quite fast to predict what you are going to say next.
The conclusion is like at the middle of no where. You really didn’t get to an end and you already give out the quote. It sounds kinda awkward to end there too.
The music that you chose is impossible to hear. First of all, it is small, which is okay, secondly, the artist sings it too high that it mixed up with your voice. That doesn’t sound so good. Thirdly, at the very last part for your quote, I think you shouldn’t change the music. Just let it run as a smooth line until it stops is better, in my opinion. And to me, it is okay if there are some kinds of lousy noises like your split or your breathing in it. You better be aware of that I suppose. Beside, thru out that one minute podcast, I only heard one baby cried sound effect. And it doesn’t really fit either. It doesn’t sound serious any more. The transition is good. No gaps is leaving behind or too different about distance.
Well I am not a very good writer so to be honest, I am not sure whether you said right grammar or not. But it seems to be right I guess. The flow of rhythm in yours is good, sound great. But it is quite loud and the sound effects you use don’t make the podcast sounds professional. One minute is a quite good length to keep the audience awake.
There are some parts in your podcast that doesn’t have the same volume. Like the narrator voice is way too loud but the cover is way too small, make it really unbalance.